The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The charts given show
comparison
of durations and activities that are experienced by adults in a specific country Correct article usage
a comparison
during
1958 and 2008. From the general overview, it is obvious to see that there were six activity categories in each year.
First and foremost, the majority of adults in 1958 Change preposition
between
likely
to spend their time Add a missing verb
were likely
for
working with 33% Change preposition
apply
individuals
from the total number. Change preposition
of individuals
This
phenomenon of Linking Words
this
category remained the same and even increased Linking Words
into
42% in 2008. More than that, sleeping habit is Change preposition
to
also
placed into the second highest for both years which was 32% in 1958 and 25% in 2008.
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On the other hand
, there were several changes Linking Words
of
preferences that can be seen. In 1958, older people Change preposition
in
tend
to not travel to work Wrong verb form
tended
where
Correct word choice
which
it
was only 2% of people Correct pronoun usage
apply
in contrast
with the earlier data in 2008 showed a slight rise which became 8% of Linking Words
total
numbers. More than that, going out with relatives showed Correct article usage
the total
approximately
twofold Correct article usage
an approximately
of
decrease from 19% of Change preposition
apply
Correct article usage
the populations
populations
in 1958 to 6% which led Fix the agreement mistake
population
Linking Words
this
data Change preposition
to this
placed
the least activity that adults spent on in 2008.Wrong verb form
placing
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