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The line chart shows the birth rate in the USA and China from 1920 to 2000

The line chart shows the birth rate in the USA and China from 1920 to 2000
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The line chart illustrates the
birth
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rates
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 in the United States and
China
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 from 1920 to 2000. The chart presents the
birth
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rates
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 in
China
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 and the USA over the period from 1920 to 2000. The data for the United States is represented by a blue line,
while
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 the statistics for
China
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 are depicted by a red line. Both lines started at 10 per cent, and their changes were nearly identical before 1945. After 1945, specifically in 1950,
China
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's
birth
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 rate surged from 5 to 20,
whereas
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 the
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 rate in the USA only increased to 15.
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, despite
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experiencing significant growth, both countries'
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rates
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 later declined considerably. By the year 2000, the USA and
China
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's
rates
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 were comparatively low.
Overall
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 , it is evident that these two countries underwent substantial changes.
Initially
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, their
rates
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 were quite similar, but eventually, both experienced a decline in
birth
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rates
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 by the year 2000."

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, rates, china with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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