Task 1 The table below shows the population ratio of females per 100 males in six different areas in 1995 and 2005.

Task 1

The table below shows the population ratio of females per 100 males in six different areas in 1995 and 2005.
The given table provides
the
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information about the population
ratios
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females
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of females
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to males in 4 continents including Asia, Africa, Europe and North
America
and
also
in other parts of the world
such
as Central
America
and Oceania. It could be seen that almost
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half of the given areas
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growth
whereas
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half depicted negative trends. Moving to more detailed data provided, in Africa the ratio of females to per 100 males decreased by 1.4 throughout the period.
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,
ratio
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the ratio
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in Europe
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had positive changes starting from 89.4 in 1995 to 92.8 in 2005. And Asia where the rate was highest in 1995 (105.3) had a slight drop of 104.9 in 2015.
According to
the illustrated data, in 3 parts of the
world
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world,
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the amount of
female
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females
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per
a
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hundred males dropped over a decade indicating
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a similar
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amount of
drops
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. In North
America
, Central
America
and
Ocenia
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Oceania
ratios started with 100 and above but lessened by 3 - 0.2 the following decade.
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