Task 1 The table below shows the population ratio of females per 100 males in six different areas in 1995 and 2005.
The given table provides
the
information about the population Correct article usage
apply
ratios
Change the noun form
ratio
females
to males in 4 continents including Asia, Africa, Europe and North Change preposition
of females
America
and also
in other parts of the world such
as Central America
and Oceania.
It could be seen that almost a
half of the given areas Correct article usage
apply
experience
growth Wrong verb form
experienced
whereas
other
half depicted negative trends.
Moving to more detailed data provided, in Africa the ratio of females to per 100 males decreased by 1.4 throughout the period. Correct article usage
the other
Similarly
, ratio
in Europe Add an article
the ratio
which
had positive changes starting from 89.4 in 1995 to 92.8 in 2005. And Asia where the rate was highest in 1995 (105.3) had a slight drop of 104.9 in 2015.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
According to
the illustrated data, in 3 parts of the world
the amount of Add a comma
world,
female
per Fix the agreement mistake
females
a
hundred males dropped over a decade indicating Correct article usage
apply
similar
amount of Correct article usage
a similar
drops
. In North Fix the agreement mistake
drop
America
, Central America
and Ocenia
ratios started with 100 and above but lessened by 3 - 0.2 the following decade.Correct your spelling
Oceania
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