You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Shani,
I hope
this
letter finds you well.I have been quiet
busy Correct your spelling
quite
last
few weeks as I was working extra hours and that's why I couldn't reply to your letter sooner.And I'm really excited to see you and your family in three weeks of time.
Correct article usage
the last
Firstly
,as you know that
Correct word choice
apply
I
never been to London before and I am super thrilled to roam everywhere and do some activities with you.Since Add the auxiliary verb
I have
this
is the first time,I want to know how will be the weather when I'm there and should I need to bring any special clothes sich
as Jackets,Jumpers or any Correct your spelling
such
swimwears
.Fix the agreement mistake
swimwear
Moreover
,let me know where do
we Unnecessary verb
apply
visit
and what activities Verb problem
are
are
you think of doing Unnecessary verb
apply
while
I am in London.
Furthermore
,I am delight
to try some authentic British food and visit some Wrong verb form
delighted
spacticular
cafes and restaurants which I saw Correct your spelling
spectacular
particular
in
the Change preposition
on
Interenet
.I have attached some pictures of restaurants in Correct your spelling
Internet
this
letter and
let me know your thoughts too.
Correct word choice
apply
Moreover
,I am excited to see your daughter and I wish to bring her a gift from Australia.Can you please let me know what Verb problem
apply
does
she Unnecessary verb
apply
like
the most for her age and let me know whether you and your family need anything from Australia tooCorrect subject-verb agreement
likes
Change the punctuation
?
.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Change the punctuation
?
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task achievement
It's clear from the letter that you have responded to the task requirements; however, the response could be expanded upon. Make sure each part of the task is addressed equally and with enough detail.
task achievement
Your letter's tone is friendly, which is suitable for writing to a friend. However, you could enhance the letter by using a variety of sentence structures and more expressive vocabulary.
coherence and cohesion
The logical structure of your letter needs work. Arrange your ideas into clear paragraphs with a single idea in each one. This will greatly aid in the reader's understanding and the flow of your letter.
coherence and cohesion
Start with a proper greeting, such as 'Dear [friend's name],' and end with an appropriate closing, like 'Warm regards' followed by your name. This will make your letter feel more complete and personalized.
coherence and cohesion
To achieve greater coherence, make clear connections between your ideas and paragraphs. Use linking words and phrases to guide the reader through your thoughts and requests.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,