The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The picture illustrates the process of recycling glass.

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, the process is cyclical and involves six main stages from collecting the glass from a bin to delivering the final product to a supermarket.

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, unused bottles are taken from a bin in houses before being sent to the treatment plant by a refuse lorry. In

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place, bottles are washed and sterilized in a machine to ensure that all of the waste material that might attach has been removed. After the cleaning process, bottles are

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crushed below a certain tool and melted above the fire to get into a liquid. Once

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stage has been done, the liquid is

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used to be the main material for making a new product in the moulding machine.

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, all of the products will be delivered to a supermarket for

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again.

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, all of the processes may repeat again from the first step to the end of the stage.

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Topic Vocabulary:

diagram
recycled
stages
collection
waste glass
sources
bottles
jars
windows
transported
recycling facility
sorted
color
processes
cleaned
impurities
labels
caps
crushed
cullet
raw material
melted
furnace
temperature
molded
new glass products
distribution
consumers

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The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Agree or Disagree)

For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?