The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The picture illustrates the process of recycling glass.
Overall
, the process is cyclical and involves six main stages from collecting the glass from a bin to delivering the final product to a supermarket.
Initially
, unused bottles are taken from a bin in houses before being sent to the treatment plant by a refuse lorry. In this
place, bottles are washed and sterilized in a machine to ensure that all of the waste material that might attach has been removed. After the cleaning process, bottles are then
crushed below a certain tool and melted above the fire to get into a liquid. Once this
stage has been done, the liquid is then
used to be the main material for making a new product in the moulding machine. Finally
, all of the products will be delivered to a supermarket for used
again. Replace the word
use
Additionally
, all of the processes may repeat again from the first step to the end of the stage.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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