The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The map gives an illustration of the condition of the
Town
of
Stromer
between 1995 and now.
Overall
, as seen from the map, there are so many developments if we compare the condition of the
Town
of
Stromer
in 1995 and now. In 1995, the
Town
of
Stromer
was dominated by forests and only some places could be found there,
such
as one big farmland, two houses, and a shop.
However
, there are some new places that can be found in the
Town
of
Stromer
now. The farmland is not as big as before
as well as
the forests. There are so many new constructions in the land that used to be a forest,
such
as an airport which is located in the North-East of the map, new shops, and schools.
Moreover
, the house located in the North is changed into two apartments. In total, there is massive construction in the
Town
of
Stromer
nowadays, as shown, there are 6 apartments, 6 shops, 1 school, 1 airport, and a smaller farmland and 2 smaller forests.
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