The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
The diagram illustrates the way
rainwater
is collected and processed into drinking water
in a town in Australia.
Overall
, it involves five main steps for rainwater
to turn into drinking water
.
Firstly
, the rainwater
will fall directly into the drain during rainy days. All the drains at the housing area are inter-connected
to a Correct your spelling
interconnected
water
filter. Th
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The
water
filter will then
filter the rainwater
accordingly
and placed
it into a Wrong verb form
place
water
storage.
There is a pipe which is used to send the storage water
to another tank for water
treatment. In the water
treatment tank, chemicals are added to the water
to ensure that the water
is safe for human use and consumption. At the final step, water
which is ready for use will then
go through the pipe and to
be sent to different houses. The most common use of Fix the infinitive
apply
water
is for drinking, cleaning and showering.Submitted by michellehoon0924 on
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