The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given
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pie
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chart describes the detail
about
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the three different
of
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meals in which breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks are included . Overview, in
first
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the first
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two categories the percentage of dinner is maximum as
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compared
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to other meals
whereas
, in added
sugar
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the proportion of snacks is highest . As per the
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information
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in sodium and saturated fat the proportion of dinner is large around 40%,
however
, in added
sugar
meals , it is just 23%. Interestingly, the percentage of breakfast is
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in
given
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three types of nutrients. Moving towards the rest of the data as in sodium, saturated fat, and added
sugar
, the proportion of snacks is calculated
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%, 21%, and 41%
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. The percentage of lunch is 29% in sodium which is almost 10% less in added
sugar
and 26% in saturated fat.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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