The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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pie charts compare the average rates in different meals of three types of nutrients, which may be risky if consumed too much.

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snacks contain high

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of

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, products that are eaten at dinner contain high

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of

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. In detail, the rates of different kinds of nutrients are

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in terms of breakfast.

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saturated fat

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and added

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16%, the

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of sadium is just under

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(14%). Turning to the proportions for lunch,

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accounted for 29

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followed by saturated fat, which is only 3% lower than the rate of

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. Respective of the proportions for products which are preferred at dinner,

sodium

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represents 43%, which is almost double

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the rate of added

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, the percentage of added

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in products which are consumed as snacks

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for 42%, which

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times

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the rate of saturated fat, and three times

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the proportion of

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