The chart below shows the promotions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. Summarise and write the information in about 150 words making relevant comparisons

The chart below shows the promotions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. 

Summarise and write the information in about 150 words making relevant comparisons
The pie graph displays
number
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of British
students
at a university who speak other languages, between 2000
and2010
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and 2010
Overall
, the
number
of British
students
who speak other languages ​​is not equal.
Moreover
, the highest
number
of English
students
speak Spanish In 2010, British
students
who spoke German reached the highest 35% of the year. The
number
of
students
who can speak another language reaches 20%.
However
, 10% of
students
speak German, 10% of
students
speak French, 10% of
students
speak two languages, the remaining 10% do not speak another language in 2010
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