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The chart below shows the promotions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. Summarise and write the information in about 150 words making relevant comparisons

The chart below shows the promotions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. Summarise and write the information in about 150 words making relevant comparisons
The pie graph displays
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 of British
students
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 at a university who speak other languages, between 2000
and2010
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and 2010
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, the
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 of British
students
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 who speak other languages ​​is not equal.
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, the highest
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 of English
students
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 speak Spanish In 2010, British
students
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 who spoke German reached the highest 35% of the year. The
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 of
students
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 who can speak another language reaches 20%.
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 , 10% of
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 speak German, 10% of
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 speak French, 10% of
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 speak two languages, the remaining 10% do not speak another language in 2010

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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