The charts give information about the proportions of boys and girls of a school who achieved high grades (A or B +) in respective courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the changes in the percentages of
boys
and girls
gaining impressive grades in five different subjects in 1996 and 2000.
Overall
, there were distinct gender differences across these five disciplines: science underwent an improvement in the performance of girls
, while
the arts and humanities had a higher proportion
of high-performing boys
. The percentage of high-achieving boys
was generally higher than that of girls
in 2000.
Humanities saw the most considerable increase in the proportion
of high-achieving boys
, becoming the top-performing course, with the figure nearly doubling to 45% in 2000. By comparison
, the figure for girls
dropped by 8% to 25%. Similar changes happened to the arts, in which the percentage of boys
who gained high scores rose significantly to 22%, and the figure for girls
slightly declined to 25%. Languages were another area which experienced a drop in the percentage of high-achieving girls
, down to 31%, while
the proportion
of high-achievers for boys
remained unchanged at about 21%.
There were contrasting patterns in the performance of science and maths for both genders. Around one-third of the boys
obtained satisfying grades in these science courses in 1996, higher than the figures for other subjects. However
, only around 18% and 17% reached this
level in 2000. In contrast
, the proportion
of high-achieving girls
in these two courses climbed to 11% and 15% respectively, although
these figures were still far lower than those for the other three areas.Submitted by chungoc2001 on
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