The chart below show the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reportin the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the
percentage
of Australian female
and Fix the agreement mistake
females
male
of education background in five types of qualifications in 1999.
The Fix the agreement mistake
males
percentage
of female’s Bachelor’s degree
was higher than male’s percentage
by about 10%. However
, men have higher
proportion in the higher Add an article
a higher
educations
(postgraduate Fix the agreement mistake
education
diploma
and Master’s degree
). In postgraduate diploma
, male
account for 70%, but the Fix the agreement mistake
males
percentage
of post graduated
women was around 30%. Add a hyphen
post-graduated
Additionally
, the proportion of men in studied in
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for
master’s
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a master’s
degree
was 60%. It was higher than the percentage
of female
who Fix the agreement mistake
females
has
a master’s Correct subject-verb agreement
have
degree
by 20%.
Overall
, in the case of skilled vocational diploma
and undergraduate Fix the agreement mistake
diplomas
diploma
, opposite patterns are observed based on gender. Men’s skilled vocational Fix the agreement mistake
diplomas
diploma
was highest
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the highest
percentage
to compare
with other qualifications. Meanwhile, the proportion of women’s skilled vocational Change the verb form
compared
diploma
was Fix the agreement mistake
diplomas
lowest
point.Change the article
the lowest
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