The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart gives information about the proportion of electricity used and greenhouse gas realised within six household appliances in
australia
.
Change the capitalization
Australia
Overall
, it is clearly seen that energy used and gases realised is
almost similar for water heating and cooling Correct subject-verb agreement
are
although
one is at highest
and the other at Correct article usage
the highest
lowest
.
Correct article usage
the lowest
To begin
with, electronics used for heating consumed
just over two-fifths of electricity but Wrong verb form
consume
produces
only less than a fifth of greenhouse emissions, Correct subject-verb agreement
produce
however
, water heating is seen to be almost one-third in both the
areas. For other Correct article usage
apply
appliances
it uses only 15% of energy but produces twice Add a comma
appliances,
of
that of greenhouse gas.
Moving forward, there is seen very less change in the Change preposition
apply
remaing
three devices. Both refrigeration and lighting Correct your spelling
remaining
emits
twice of gases Change the verb form
emit
than
the energy used which is 14% and 8%. Change preposition
as
In
contrast
cooling remained unchanged staying under 5%.Add a comma
contrast,
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