The table presents how much people from five employment sectors earned, in three different salary levels in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the largest, lowest and average employee earnings across 5 different industries in 2009.
In terms of the maximum salary
amount
, the finance
industry
ranked first at the
$8850, which was almost twice as much as that of the transportation sector. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, the maximum earning in the hospitality industry
was the lowest,($2900). Construction and manufacturing had a similar amount
at around $3300.
In regards to the minimum earning level, the finance
sector ranked the
first with $1600, followed by manufacturing, which figure was at $930. The Correct article usage
apply
amount
of transportation, hospitality and construction were
lower than $900. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Moreover
, the average amount
varied slightly amoung
all sectors except the Correct your spelling
among
finance
industry
, which had the largest average earning with more than $5000, wheares
, the other sectors had no more than $3000. The lowest average salary was $1895 in the hospitality sector.
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whereas
wheres
Overall
, the finance
industry
earned the most, having the number ranking in the
first place across all three categories. It's Correct article usage
apply
also
clear that construction
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the construction
insdustry
had the biggest differences between the maximum and minimum earnings.Correct your spelling
industry
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