The line graph illustrates the expenditure of British citizens on four different purposes of visiting abroad (holiday, business, visiting friends or relatives and miscellaneous) from 1993 to 2013.

The line chart shows the spending of British people on various occasions of

traveling

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travelling

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abroad that consist

of

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including

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holiday

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holidays

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, business, visiting friends or relatives, and miscellaneous between the

year

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years

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1993 and 2013

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, It is noticeable that

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holiday

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the holiday

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starts at

such

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a high point,

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others remain starting from

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number below 3.

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, the three of them managed to keep increasing,

whereas

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miscellaneous had a bit of fluctuation. It can be concluded that, as

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holiday

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holidays

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starting

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at 9 billion, which is an outrageous amount of spending, there was a huge gap that separated it from other visitation purposes, and in 2008,

holiday

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trip

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had

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peaked

that

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reaches

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roughly 25 billion, before it

got

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shrunk sharply.

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, 2008 until 2013 were the years of stability for business

trip

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trips

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and

trip

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trips

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of visiting

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to visit

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family and relatives. In 1993, both of them did not start at the same level

,

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but overlapped each other as

the

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time went by at approximately a little under 6

billions

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billion

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, which made miscellaneous never

had

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have

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a chance to be the top visitation reason as its graphic stayed just below 3

billions

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billion

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.