The chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010.
The two pie charts compare the percentage of university students in some
university
in England who could speak more than the official Fix the agreement mistake
universities
language
of their country in 2000 and 2010.
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Overall
, among the Linking Words
student
, Spanish was the most popular Fix the agreement mistake
students
language
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while
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,
German Remove the comma
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speakers
and two other Use synonyms
languages
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language
speakers
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were
accounted for the smallest proportion in those years.
As can be seen, Spanish Unnecessary verb
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speakers
were Use synonyms
reasponsible
for the greatest percentage of foreign Correct your spelling
responsible
language
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speakers
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30% and 35% respectively in 2000 and 2010. Wrong verb form
was
Moreover
, the number of students who spoke another Linking Words
language
experienced a small increase from 15% to 20%.
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On the other hand
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also
evident is the number of German and two other Linking Words
language
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speakers
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remaind
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remained
remain
remains
about
10% of all the students, Change preposition
at about
whereas
, Linking Words
popularity
of French fell sharply by 5% in 2010. Add an article
the popularity
Farthermore
, the proportion of people who were not able to speak any other Correct your spelling
Furthermore
languages
but English halved to 10% in 2010.Fix the agreement mistake
language
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