The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
The bar chart illustrates the expenditure on fast foods, namely
Hamburgers
, fish
and chips
, and pizza
every week with pence
person in accordance with socio-economic status in Britain and the line graph provides information about the grammes
of consumed processed foods from 1970 till 1990.
It is clearly seen that hamburgers
were such
famous foodstuffs among high and average income groups that consumption was the highest in grammes
during two decades.
Consumers who earned highly spent about 45 pence
during a week and purchased fish
and chips
and pizza
differentiated only roughly 3 pence
. Average and high-income groups bought pizza
and hamburgers
for nearly the same amount of money about 13 pence
. Medium income group allocated their large amount of money on hamburgers
and fish
and chips
34 and 25 pence
every week, however
, the great expense of low-income people lay on fish
and chips
similar with
high-income people.
In 1970 Change preposition
to
hamburgers
and pizza
were eaten under 100 grammes
approximately 80 and 40 respectively whereas
both types of these fast food went through increases in the next years. In 1983 consumption of hamburgers
exceeded fish
and chips
with above 200 grammars. As well as
eaten pizza
grammes
outstripped fish
and chips
in 1989. At the end
of the period, hamburgers
reached the highest 550 grammes
on consumption.Submitted by kmuxayyo97 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hamburgers, fish, chips, pizza, pence, grammes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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