The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
The bar chart illustrates the expenditure on fast foods, namely
Hamburgers
,
fish
and
chips
, and
pizza
every week with
pence
person in accordance with socio-economic status in Britain and the line graph provides information about the
grammes
of consumed processed foods from 1970 till 1990. It is clearly seen that
hamburgers
were
such
famous foodstuffs among high and average income groups that consumption was the highest in
grammes
during two decades. Consumers who earned highly spent about 45
pence
during a week and purchased
fish
and
chips
and
pizza
differentiated only roughly 3
pence
. Average and high-income groups bought
pizza
and
hamburgers
for nearly the same amount of money about 13
pence
. Medium income group allocated their large amount of money on
hamburgers
and
fish
and
chips
34 and 25
pence
every week,
however
, the great expense of low-income people lay on
fish
and
chips
similar
with
Change preposition
to
show examples
high-income people. In 1970
hamburgers
and
pizza
were eaten under 100
grammes
approximately 80 and 40 respectively
whereas
both types of these fast food went through increases in the next years. In 1983 consumption of
hamburgers
exceeded
fish
and
chips
with above 200 grammars.
As well as
eaten
pizza
grammes
outstripped
fish
and
chips
in 1989.
At the end
of the period,
hamburgers
reached the highest 550
grammes
on consumption.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hamburgers, fish, chips, pizza, pence, grammes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food industry
  • expenditure
  • demographics
  • consumer behavior
  • nutritional content
  • advertising campaigns
  • socio-economic status
  • health implications
  • dietary habits
  • processed foods
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