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The chart below shows ehat Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after 5 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows ehat Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after 5 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph and the table depict the types of
job
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 of anthropology
graduates
 after completing their graduation and the salary ranges of the anthropologists in their workplaces after five years. We can see here, the highest number of
graduates
 join in full-time
works
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work
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 and the lowest number of
graduates
 continue their postgrad study with
part time
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 work.
Besides
, the
goverment
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government
 sector
pay
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the
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anthropologists compared to other options. On the one hand, 52% of
graduates
 engage themselves in full-time
works
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work
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. 15% of them work part-time and only 5% of the students continue their
study
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studies
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 with their part-time
works
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.
Additionally
, the rate for full-time
postgrad
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 is 3%,
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 than part-time job holder students.
Furthermore
, among all the students who completed graduation, 12% remain unemployed.
On the other hand
, among the anthropologists who are working as freelance consultants, 40% of them earn $45,000-90000 and the rate for $
100000+
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100,000+
 earners are same. 15% of them earn less than $75000 and only 5% of
anthropolosists
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anthropologists
 in
this
 sector earn less than 5%.
In addition
, in the
goverment
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government
sector
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 50% of
recruitements
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recruitments
recruitment
 earn more than $100000
when
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while
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 30% of them earn less than $100000. the rate for
another
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 two ranges are
same
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to
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 the freelance consultants.
Furthermore
, 30% of anthropology
graduates
 who work in private companies earn the highest salary where most of them stuck at the range from $50000 to $74999.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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