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the line graph give information about acid rain emmissions in uk between 1990 to 2007 summarise this figure

the line graph give information about acid rain emmissions in uk between 1990 to 2007 summarise this figure
#line #information #acid #rain #emmissions #uk #summarise #figure
The line graph depicts the information
of
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acid
rain
 discharge in England from 1990 to 2007.
Overall
, it was noticed that the energy
resourses
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resources
play
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played
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 a key factor behind
acid
rain
 over the 17 years. First of all, the
noticable
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noticeable
 thing is domestic appliances that produced
acid
rain
 under one
million
tonnes
 and after some fluctuations,
its
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it was
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 stable at 0.3
million
tonnes
 in 2007.
Secondly
, it was observed that energy producers like electricity,gas and water supply played a vital aspect in
acid
rain
.
Moreover
, a quick downfall was measured in
above
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the above
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 things from 3.3
million
tonnes
 to 0.5 in 17 years.
Furthermore
,the other industries emit
acid
rain
 above 2
million
tonnes
 in 1991 but after every year a minor
dropped
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 off
occur
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 and ends at 1.2
million
tonnes
 in 2007.
Lastly
, it was observed that the transportation and communication outflow
acid
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rain
 in 1991 was calculated
0.6
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at 0.6
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million
tonnes
.
Similarly
,in the year 2005 it
touches
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touched
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1
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the 1
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million
 mark point but after
slightly
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 changes it again comes
at
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to
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their
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its
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 initial value after 2 years.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words acid, rain, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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