The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014

The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014
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The given illustration provides the changes in New Zealand primary school
students
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learning a second language between 2006 and 2014.
Overall
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, during
this
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eight-year period,
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remained steady,
while
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the rest are being followed by sharp fluctuations. Now, turning to the details, in 2006 Chinese
was
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chosen by the least number of
students
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,
whereas
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Japanese
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had the largest percentage in the same year.
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, by 2010, amount of Chinese learners dramatically increased to 14
percent
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per cent
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till two thousand fourteen . And number of
students
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learning Japanese,
on the contrary
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, went down from 28 percent to nineteen percent. It could be noticed that
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German and Spanish were
quite
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quite a
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popular
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among
students
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in two thousand six, but
tendency
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the tendency
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oscillated
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more than
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other languages. The period between 2012 and 2013 saw a sharp growth in other languages, results were
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the same
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as
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in Japanese
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until a descending tendency
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by
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from
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2013 to 2014 in others.
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