The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps

informs

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us about the current

site

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of Norbiton town’s industrial area

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and the planned future development of the

site

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. From the planned

site

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development map, it is shown that all of the factories will be replaced

for

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housing areas.

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, there will be the addition of several public infrastructures,

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new roads. In the future development of the

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, it is planned that there will be a total of seven housings

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the

site

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. Most of them will be built in the current area,

although

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there will

one

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housing across the river. As

the

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result, there will be three new roads in the future,

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which

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two of them has the function

to connect

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of connecting

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the current

site

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with the farmland area. There will

also

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be several public infrastructures built,

such

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playground

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playgrounds

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school

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schools

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, medical

centre

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centres

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, and shops. In the planned

site

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, there will be no factories left.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words site with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people consider prices as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (eg. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.