The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps
informs
us about the current Change the verb form
inform
site
of Norbiton town’s industrial areaUse synonyms
,
and the planned future development of the Remove the comma
apply
site
.
From the planned Use synonyms
site
development map, it is shown that all of the factories will be replaced Use synonyms
for
housing areas. Change preposition
with
Furthermore
, there will be the addition of several public infrastructures, Linking Words
along with
new roads.
In the future development of the Linking Words
site
, it is planned that there will be a total of seven housings Use synonyms
in
the Change preposition
on
site
. Most of them will be built in the current area, Use synonyms
although
there will Linking Words
one
housing across the river. As Add a missing verb
be one
the
result, there will be three new roads in the future, Correct article usage
a
in
Change preposition
apply
which
two of them has the function Correct pronoun usage
apply
to connect
the current Change preposition
of connecting
site
with the farmland area. There will Use synonyms
also
be several public infrastructures built, Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
playground
, Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
school
, medical Fix the agreement mistake
schools
centre
, and shops. In the planned Fix the agreement mistake
centres
site
, there will be no factories left.Use synonyms
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