The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.
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The bar chart compares the ten highest-ranking countries in terms of
electricity
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generation and
consumption
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in 2014.
Overall
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, the amounts of
electricity
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produced and consumed in China and the US were far higher than the other nations. It is
also
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noticeable that Germany was the only country that consumed more
electricity
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than it generated. Out of the 10 nations, China ranked first with the production and
consumption
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of
electricity
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of more than 5,300
billion
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kWh
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each. The US, the second largest
electricity
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producer and consumer, generated 4,099
billion
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kWh
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and consumed 3,866
billion
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kWh
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. Looking at the remaining countries, we can see that Russia was the only nation with
electricity
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generation and
consumption
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being just over 1,000
billion
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kWh
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each, followed by Japan and India, with the figures being slightly lower, ranging from 698.8 to 1,057
billion
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kWh
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. The figures for the other countries show a difference in production and
consumption
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of
electricity
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at around 50-150
billion
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kWh
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,
while
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it is interesting to note that Germany produced 526.6
billion
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kWh
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of
electricity
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, but it consumed 582.5
billion
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kWh
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, consumption, billion, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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