The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.
The bar chart compares the ten highest-ranking countries in terms of
electricity
generation and
consumption
in 2014.
Overall
, the amounts of
electricity
produced and consumed in China and the US were far higher than the other nations. It is
also
noticeable that Germany was the only country that consumed more
electricity
than it generated. Out of the 10 nations, China ranked first with the production and
consumption
of
electricity
of more than 5,300
billion
kWh
each. The US, the second largest
electricity
producer and consumer, generated 4,099
billion
kWh
and consumed 3,866
billion
kWh
. Looking at the remaining countries, we can see that Russia was the only nation with
electricity
generation and
consumption
being just over 1,000
billion
kWh
each, followed by Japan and India, with the figures being slightly lower, ranging from 698.8 to 1,057
billion
kWh
. The figures for the other countries show a difference in production and
consumption
of
electricity
at around 50-150
billion
kWh
,
while
it is interesting to note that Germany produced 526.6
billion
kWh
of
electricity
, but it consumed 582.5
billion
kWh
.
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