The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These charts illustrate the amount of three distinct nutrients in normal daily meals. These nutrients might be harmful for
human
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the human
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body whether they have been consumed much. We can see here,
the
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that the
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rate
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of
sodium
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, saturated fat and added
sugar
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fluctuate
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in
differnt
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different
meals. The masses of the USA take around half of the
sodium
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and added
sugar
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in the
dinner
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and
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snack
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snacks
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respectively.
One
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the one hand,
sodium
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is mostly consumed
in
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at
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dinner
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.
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snack
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and breakfast contain 14% of
sodium
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respectively. The
rate
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for lunch stood at 29%.
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,
saturatednfat
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saturated fat
is
also
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consumed by people mostly
in
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at
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dinner
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. Here, the
percentange
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percentage
for lunch is 3% lower than
sodium
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.
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, breakfast for the
poeple
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people
of the USA
have
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16% saturated fat and
snack
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have 21%.
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, the scenario for added
sugar
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is totally different. About half of the added
sugar
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is consumed with
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snack
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. The
rate
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here for breakfast is
same
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as saturated fat.
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, the
rate
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for
dinner
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is slightly higher than one-fifth. The percentage for lunch is
comperatively
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comparatively
lower than two other nutrients.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, sodium, sugar, dinner, snack with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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