The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides data about the
value
of a particular country’s exports in different groups throughout 2015 and 2016. Whereas
, the table indicates the difference of
percentage in each category in 2016 compared to 2015. Change preposition
in
Overall
, it is clear that
Petroleum products
have been the most exported items in both years.
In the year 2015, the value
of Petroleum products
were
at $60 Change the verb form
was
billion
and rose up by 3% in 2016. Engineered goods had similar values as well, they had a value
of $55 billion
in 2015 and passed over 60 billion
in the following year due to
an 8.5% rise.
The remaining 3 categories were lower compared to Petroleum and Engineered products
. Gems and Jewellery were valued at over 40$ billion
but had a 5.18% decrease in 2016. Agricultural products
carried a value
of $30 billion
and had an increase up to only 0.81%. Lastly
, Textiles were ranked at %25 billion
for value
in 2015 and escalated to over %30 billion
in 2016.Submitted by ravann.ibrahimli on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words value, products, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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