The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts illustrate the result of visitor
safisfaction
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satisfaction
regarding the Parkway Hotel's
customer
service
performance through a questionnaire that
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asked to
a 100-different
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100 different
people
in 2005 and 2010.
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,
people
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who
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rated
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customer
service
was
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as
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above average satisfactory level
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dominating in a five-year period. In the beginning, the
people
that felt medium
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satisfied
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with the
customer
service
was dominating the proportion with almost
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half. Meanwhile,
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poor
service
placed the second highest portion of the answer which accounted for
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.
Similarly
, the
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results
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of good and very poor were about 15%
whereas
the excellent
rate
of
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customer
service
was insignificant. In 2010, the hotel successfully increased the
customer
service
's performance by having a good result nearly
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of the proportion.
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who rated the
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service
was
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as
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excellent
were
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also
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exponentially by 23% during the period.
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average satisfaction
rate
that was received from the
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respondents
respondent
accounted for 17%
whereas
the poor
rate
was only 12% in proportion.
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,
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of
peoples
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people
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who
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rated
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the
customer
service
was
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as
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very poor was very minor.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words customer, service, people, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • customer service
  • questionnaire
  • survey
  • respondents
  • rating scale
  • hospitality
  • customer satisfaction
  • comparison
  • data
  • trends
  • improvement
  • deterioration
  • feedback
  • service areas
  • hospitality industry
  • guest experience
  • satisfaction level
  • to rate
  • significant
  • frequency
  • percentage
  • chart
  • bar graph
  • pie chart
  • analysis
  • conclusion
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