The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown Below. Leisure time in a typical week in hours – by sex and employment status, 1998-1999.
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The bar chart details how
many
free Correct quantifier usage
much
time
per week, in hours
, that
males and females from five employment status Correct word choice
apply
categories
(full
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full-time
time
, part
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part-time
time
, unemployed, retired, and housewives) in
1998 to 1999. Looking from an Change preposition
from
overall
persepctive
, it is readily apparent that Correct your spelling
perspective
men
mostly had more time
off than women
, in three status group
, Fix the agreement mistake
groups
while
in the other 2 categories
there were no data for Add a comma
categories,
men
.
The amount of free hours
for unemployed and retired categories
from both gender
were quite similar and the highest, Fix the agreement mistake
genders
it
was just over 80 Correct pronoun usage
apply
hours
per week for men
and approximately 70 hours
for women
. These numbers were nearly doubled compared with the next most-highest, which was full
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full-time
time
employed, about 47 hours
for men
and roughly 40 hours
for women
.
For the part
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part-time
time
and houswives
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housewives
categories
, it was only provided females' free time
data in those period years. Ladies who had a part
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part-time
time
job acquired off hours
nearly the same with
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as
full
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full-time
time
employed women
, about 40 hours
. While
housewives women
had approximately 50 hours
free
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of free
time
per week.Submitted by narawriteshare9 on
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