The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
Above data shows
computer
ownership and education level by 2002~2010. Overall
, all of grahps are getting higher than the past year.
In the computer
ownership, the percentage of 2002 was almost 60% and it growed up by every year. The middle grahp: 2006 is higer then
60% and the last
graph: 2010 is bellow then
80%. So, 2002 up to 2010 almost 30% of computer
ownership growed up.
Next in level of education, both bars 2002 and 2010 was the least percentage at "No high school diploma" and the highest percentage was "Postgraduate qualification" for both graphs. All of the graphs appers, when people get higher education levels the computer
ownerships are increasing beside it.Submitted by chwkmkmn on
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