The diagrams below show the structure of a solar panel and how it can be used to heat air and water . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .
The diagrams illustrate the solar
panel
organization and how it works.
On the one hand, a solar panel
can heat the wind. It is made of a box and a transparent sheet. The cold weather enters to box and the heat energy of the sun produces a hot airflow at the outlet.
On the other hand
, there is also
a solar panel
that is
used for heating water
. In this
model, in addition
to the equipment mentioned before, there is a zigzag cylinder of water
. Firstly
, The chilly water
comes in from the inlet to the pipe of water
, then
hot with solar energy. Finally
, hot water
goes out from the outlet.
Overall
, a solar panel
is a means made with special equipment. The cool air and water
get into a box and then
they become hot with sun radiation. As a result
, hot water
and air are produced.Submitted by omranz2013 on
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