the line graph shows the value of australia's trade with china, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in AUD billion dollars. summerizing the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relevant

the line graph shows the value of australia's trade with china, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in AUD billion dollars. 

summerizing the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relevant
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The line graphs depict how much
Australia
earned from goods imported and exported with China, the USA and Japan in terms of billions of Australian dollars between 2002 and 2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
trade between
Australia
and all three countries
was
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increased over the period but with
China
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China,
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it experienced significant fluctuations. Meanwhile, the USA was the largest exporting partner of
Australia
as compared to other countries. It appears that in 2002, nearly $4.5
billion
worth of items
imported
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to
Australia
from China, which
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down to $2.5
billion
in 2003 and afterwards continuously rose to $4.5
billion
in 2005.
However
, the export activity reached around $3
billion
in 2005 after drastic variations of approximately $2
billion
and $ 4.5
billion
in 2004 and 2003, respectively.
According to
graph
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,
export
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exports
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with
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Japan in 2002 rose from about $1
billion
to nearly $ 2.5
billion
in 2005.
Likewise
, from 2002 to 2005,
export
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exports
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from the USA increased from approximately $2.4 to $2.8
billion
and
import
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imports
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- from about $1.5 to $2
billion
.
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