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The line graph shows the value of australia's trade with china, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in AUD billion dollars. summerizing the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relevant

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 line graphs depict how much
Australia
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 earned from goods imported and exported with China, the USA and Japan in terms of billions of Australian dollars between 2002 and 2005.
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it is clear that
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 trade between
Australia
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 and all three countries increased over the period but with China, it experienced significant fluctuations. Meanwhile, the USA was the largest exporting partner of
Australia
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 as compared to other countries. It appears that in 2002, nearly $4.5
billion
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 worth of items were imported to
Australia
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 from China, which dropped down to $2.5
billion
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 in 2003 and afterwards continuously rose to $4.5
billion
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 in 2005.
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, the export activity reached around $3
billion
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 in 2005 after drastic variations of approximately $2
billion
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 and $ 4.5
billion
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 in 2004 and 2003, respectively.
According to
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 the graph, exports to Japan in 2002 rose from about $1
billion
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 to nearly $ 2.5
billion
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 in 2005.
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, from 2002 to 2005, exports from the USA increased from approximately $2.4 to $2.8
billion
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 and imports - from about $1.5 to $2
billion
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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