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The line graph below illustrates the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK between 1980 and 2000.

The line graph below illustrates the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK between 1980 and 2000.
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The provided line graph depicts information on how the forest industry was used and what kind of products were produced over 20 years in the UK.
Paper
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, sawn
wood
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 and
Wood
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Pulp
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 are mentioned. A glance at the line graph makes it clear that
Paper
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 packaging was the highest invented of all time
while
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 Sawn
Wood
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 and
Wood
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Pulp
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 did not experience big changes throughout the period in question. As far as
paper
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 packaging is concerned, in 1980 it made up just over 200 (in
million
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tonnes
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) and slightly went up reaching 250 (in
million
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tonnes
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).The 1990 year experienced rapid growth in
paper
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 packaging which was added for 100 (in
million
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tonnes
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) representing 350 (in
million
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tonnes
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).It is interesting to note that, the invention of
paper
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 ranked first during all the periods which
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 mentioned. When it comes to Sawn-
Wood
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 and
Wood
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Pulp
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 production, they both could not go up over 200 and stood at the same level in 1990.One interesting point is that Sawn
wood
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 ranked second place in 1980,
however
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 by 2000 years it was replaced with
Wood
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Pulp
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, wood, pulp, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • production
  • paper
  • wood pulp
  • sawn-wood
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • significant
  • turning point
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • environmental policy
  • demand
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • projections
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