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The chart below show the percentage of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other language in addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.

The chart below show the percentage of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other language in addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.
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The pie graphs illustrate the proportion of English university pupils who
able
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were able
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 to speak
foriegn
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foreign
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,
such
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 as German,
Spanish
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, and French, between 2000 and 2010. At a glance, what
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 out from the given figure is that most of those
students
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 can communicate in
Spanish
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,
whereas
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 the number of British
students
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 who
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 to speak in other
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 declined about two times in 2010 compared to that of 2000. Looking at the chart in 2000, more closely,
Spanish
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 speakers dominated the majority part of English
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 who had the talent to speak other
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 at 30 %, followed by university learners who cannot communicate in other
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 at 20%.
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, it is interesting to note that those
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 who can speak French and another language made up the same ratio at 15%, which is
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similarly
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 to the percentages of
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 who can communicate in German and two other
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 that are responsible for the resemblance ratio at 10%. In 2010, part
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 the number of English
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 who can speak
Spanish
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took a predominant proportion at 35%. The ratio of other foreign
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 constituted in different percentage compared to those in 2000. Interestingly, the proportion of
students
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 who can speak another language
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 for 20%;
however
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, the portion in the rest of
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 accounted for 10% in each
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, spanish, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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