You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the town council. In your letter, do the following: say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#developer #plans #centre #home #town #council #plan #information #addresses #sir #madam

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to you because I heard about a future plan

about building

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to build

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a shopping centre in our small town

via

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from

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my neighbours. I am so excited that heard about

this

news because of two reasons.

firstly

, there were not any supermarkets in our small city,

particularlly

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particularly

the nearest supermarket is about 12KM far from here.

secondly

, if

this

supermarket

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is build

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build

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built

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, Tourists would

pass

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come

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here to purchase their

nessecities

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necessities

. I

will

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would

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greatful

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grateful

if you would explain more about its facilities

such

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amusment

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amusement

park, petrol station and toilets. I am looking forward to

hear

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hearing

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more about it. Your

faithfuly

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faithfully

faithful

Rezapor

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structure

Make sure to use clear and coherent paragraphs, each representing a single idea or theme. Your letter blended multiple ideas in single paragraphs.

tone

Maintain formality throughout the letter. Avoid using colloquial language or contractions, and use 'I am' instead of 'I am so excited that heard about this news'.

greeting and closing

Adjust the tone to be more formal by addressing the council with 'Dear Sir or Madam' as instructed, and by using 'Yours faithfully' at the end of the letter.

clarity

Be clear and concise in your statements. Avoid using unclear expressions like 'I am so excited that heard about this news'. Instead, specify what news you are referring to.

task response

Expanding on your feelings and asking questions in a more detailed manner will help in fully achieving the task.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

108 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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