The pie charts provide information about the usage of energy by Australian households and the gas released from them.
Overall
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it is clear that
the primary part of energy usage is heating, Linking Words
while
water heating and other appliances are the considerable sector of gas discharge.
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According to
power use, it is distinguished from the chart that the main use by Australians comes from heating, about 72%. Linking Words
While
it is recognized that the usage from refrigeration, lighting and cooling is around 13% and other appliances are 15%.
Turning to emissions, it can be seen Linking Words
that
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is
the main effects of water heating, other appliances and heating which are 32%, 28% and 15%, respectively.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Besides
that part, there are another three parts which are less considered ,refrigeration, lighting and cooling. These three parts produce gas just around 25% of Linking Words
Correct article usage
the totals
totals
.Fix the agreement mistake
total
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