The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of males and females who passed the driving
test
in one unnamed Asian country between 1980 to 2010. Overall
, at first glance, it is evident that women present a higher driving test
pass rate compared to men over the timeframe.
To begin
with, women's passing rate in the
driving tests stood at 48% in 1980 and gradually increased to just over half in 1990, and the graph reached a peak at 68% in 2000. The percentage slightly decreased to 65% in 2010.
Correct article usage
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On the other hand
, men's pass
rate Replace the word
passing
in
the driving Change preposition
on
test
begin
at less than 30%, much less than in the women group, but Change the verb form
begins
then
the percentage significantly rises to 38% in 1990 and 49% in 2000 and remains stable for the next 10 years.
In conclusion, for 30 years females always show the highest rates of passing the driving test
compared to males.Submitted by rlsk.2899 on
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