You live in small university town.Last week ,you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price.You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly.However,this week,the laptop doesn't even switch on.Write to the store.In your letter: Tell the store where you live & what happened Explain the problem with the laptop State what action you would like the store to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I live in a small university town it's located in the city
center
,New Karakum Change the spelling
centre
street
,house 5,my name is Arthur, I'm 15 years old
I recently bought a new Capitalize word
Street
laptop
,It was at a pretty good discount, everything was great untill
it broke.I heard many Correct your spelling
until
such
cases in your store,for
example
recently my friend told me that he bought a new Add a comma
example,
laptop
and regret
it because it immediately Wrong verb form
regretted
break
.
Wrong verb form
broke
Firstly
,I worked on It for a whole week,at first all was fine untill
I pressed the F5 button and It started to slow down and glitched,I think that Correct your spelling
until
such
cheap laptops really break down quickly,but It doesn't matter.
Secondly
,the laptop
was bought for work or for various purposes files there is nothing bad ,but it should have minimum
guarantee for 3 years and it Add an article
a minimum
the minimum
switch
on.
I hope that you will help me by Change the verb form
switches
insprecting
my Correct your spelling
inspecting
laptop
and fixed
It ,If you ignore that ,Wrong verb form
fixing
then
I will write a bad review or complaint about your service.
Yours faithfully
ArthurSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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Tone and Style
Ensure that you introduce yourself in a professional manner appropriate for the formal context of the letter. Remember to keep the format consistent with the expectations of a formal letter of complaint.
Structure
Use transitions and coherent paragraphing that groups related ideas for improved readability. Stick to one idea per paragraph and develop that idea with supporting details.
Task Completion
Follow through each aspect of the prompt in a structured manner. Begin by stating the issue, explaining the problem, and finally stating the desired outcome.
Tone
Maintain a formal and polite tone throughout the letter, as it will reflect a respectful approach to seeking resolution. Avoid threats or negative language.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite