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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The layout
potraits
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portraits
portrays
a potential new school areas
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potential new school areas
a potential new school area
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 in the
town
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 of
Canterbury
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.
Overall
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, the two possible schools
is
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are
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 located alongside
of
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apply
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the
mainroads
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main roads
main road
 that cut across the city. The
town
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center
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centre
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 and residential areas are surrounded by the countryside, situated in the heart of
Canterbury
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. Positioned at the boundary between the countryside and residential zones, there is a university located to the north of the
town
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.
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, main roads connect
Canterbury
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 to
neighboring
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neighbouring
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 areas
such
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 as Sturry, a city with a population of 7,000, located 5km away, and Chartam, a city with a population of 4,500, situated 7km from
Canterbury
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. Plans for the construction of the first potential school involve building it alongside the main roads before reaching the
town
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center
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centre
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. Another potential school is located in the
town
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center
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centre
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, towards Chartam.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, canterbury with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 0 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • residential
  • accessibility
  • proximity
  • town centre
  • site
  • amenities
  • proposed development
  • population distribution
  • environmental impact
  • traffic congestion
  • community needs
  • educational facilities
  • public transport
  • recreational areas
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