The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The layout
potraits
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portraits
portrays
a potential new school areas
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potential new school areas
a potential new school area
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in the
town
of
Canterbury
.
Overall
, the two possible schools
is
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are
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located alongside
of
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the
mainroads
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main roads
main road
that cut across the city. The
town
center
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centre
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and residential areas are surrounded by the countryside, situated in the heart of
Canterbury
. Positioned at the boundary between the countryside and residential zones, there is a university located to the north of the
town
.
Additionally
, main roads connect
Canterbury
to
neighboring
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areas
such
as Sturry, a city with a population of 7,000, located 5km away, and Chartam, a city with a population of 4,500, situated 7km from
Canterbury
. Plans for the construction of the first potential school involve building it alongside the main roads before reaching the
town
center
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centre
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. Another potential school is located in the
town
center
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centre
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, towards Chartam.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • residential
  • accessibility
  • proximity
  • town centre
  • site
  • amenities
  • proposed development
  • population distribution
  • environmental impact
  • traffic congestion
  • community needs
  • educational facilities
  • public transport
  • recreational areas
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