The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The layout

potraits

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portraits

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a potential new school areas

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in the

town

Canterbury

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, the two possible schools

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located alongside

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the

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main roads

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that cut across the city. The

town

center

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and residential areas are surrounded by the countryside, situated in the heart of

Canterbury

. Positioned at the boundary between the countryside and residential zones, there is a university located to the north of the

town

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, main roads connect

Canterbury

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areas

such

as Sturry, a city with a population of 7,000, located 5km away, and Chartam, a city with a population of 4,500, situated 7km from

Canterbury

. Plans for the construction of the first potential school involve building it alongside the main roads before reaching the

town

center

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. Another potential school is located in the

town

center

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, towards Chartam.

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