The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selelcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavant.

The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selelcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavant.
The charts below
represents
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information about
UK
graduate and postgraduate students who did not have
full time
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work
after education in 2008.
Overall
,it is evident that
UK
students have preferences about
futher
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further
study
. To commence with the amount of graduate
student
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students
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who
choose
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futher
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further
study
made up 29,665,respectively.Individuals with part-time
work
comprised 17,735.
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when it comes to
unemlpoyment
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unemployment
people,the
figires
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figures
showed similar statistics with part-time
work
,which accounted for 16,235.The
last
one was voluntary
work
,which made up 3,500. When it comes to
destination
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of
UK
postgraduetes
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postgraduates
postgraduate
,there is
similar
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a similar
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trend with graduates.The highest point was
futher
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further
study
,which accounted for 2,725.In the second
place
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place,
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there was part-time
work
with 2,535.The figures
of
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unemployment made up 1,625,respectively.
Futhermore
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numbers
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of voluntary
work
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workers
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comprised 345,which was the lowest point in the statistics. It may be concluded from the charts that
futher
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further
study
is
most
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popular choice for students in
UK
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the UK
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and in opposite voluntary
work
is the least popular.
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