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The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The two bar
chats
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charts
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 provide information about the proportion of
movies
 released and the proportion of
ticket
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tickets
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 sold in 1996 and 2006.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the highest percentage of
movies
 released were dramas and the
least
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lowest
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 percentage of
genere
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genre
 was romance in both years.
However
, more people were inclined to comedy
movies
. With regards to 1996, more than a
quater
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quarter
 of films
launced
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launched
 were dramas
while
 tickets sold
at
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15%.
Additionally
, the proportion of laughter released exactly 20% and tickets sold at 20%.
Moreover
,
Fantacy
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Fantasy
 films launched at a rate of just over 10%.But
audience
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the audience
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 for that category
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was redcuced
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redcuced
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reduced
 to approximately 2%.
By contrast
, romance
movies
 were the least number of
movies
 released to the market at about 5%. When it comes to 2006, After 10 years market for drama
boosted
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was boosted
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 to more than 30% and
audience
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the audience
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also
 increased merely by 1%.
Furthermore
,
comedy
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the comedy
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 and
fantacy
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fantasy
category
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categories
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also
 rose to 25% and
anout
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about
 18% respectively.In comparison, tickets sold
also
 saw a growth
by
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of
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 2% each.
In contrast
 to romance, it was launched as
sames
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same
 as
before
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ten years
while
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ago while
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ticket
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tickets
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 sold decreased to approximately 1%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words movies with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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