The bar chart below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010.
Remarkable information is provided regarding the rate of growth in mean the value of properties in three different nations, over a 3-year interval, commencing in 2007 and culminating in 2010, by the given bar chart.
From an
overall
view, it is obvious that by neglecting fluctuations, the average property price increased in china
, Capitalize word
China
while
Algeria
and Argentina experienced a reduction.
By a closer examination, it can be seen that in 2007 Algeria
saw a 6 percent
increase Change the spelling
per cent
while
China and Argentina stood at 1/3 and ½ of it, respectively. A year later, while
algeria
witnessed a dramatic decline to 4.5%, two other nations grew by about 2 Change the capitalization
Algeria
percent
.
From 2009 to 2010, Argentina’s Change the spelling
per cent
porporaton
doubled and reached 2.4%. Meanwhile, in 2010 China hit its peak point and shot up from 5.4% to 6.5 Correct your spelling
population
percent
. Algeria
saw a slight diminish in these two successive year
around 3 Change the determiner
this two successive year
these two successive years
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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