The bar chart below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010.
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Remarkable information is provided regarding the rate of growth in mean the value of properties in three different nations, over a 3-year interval, commencing in 2007 and culminating in 2010, by the given bar chart. From an
overall
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view, it is obvious that by neglecting fluctuations, the average property price increased in
china
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China
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,
while
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Algeria
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and Argentina experienced a reduction. By a closer examination, it can be seen that in 2007
Algeria
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saw a 6
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percent
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per cent
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increase
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China and Argentina stood at 1/3 and ½ of it, respectively. A year later,
while
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algeria
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Algeria
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witnessed a dramatic decline to 4.5%, two other nations grew by about 2
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percent
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per cent
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. From 2009 to 2010, Argentina’s
porporaton
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population
doubled and reached 2.4%. Meanwhile, in 2010 China hit its peak point and shot up from 5.4% to 6.5
percent
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.
Algeria
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saw a slight diminish in
these two successive year
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this two successive year
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around 3
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percent
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per cent
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words algeria, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage growth
  • average property prices
  • economic conditions
  • real estate market
  • year-to-year growth rate
  • government policies
  • international events
  • growth trend
  • investment attractiveness
  • socioeconomic status
  • forecasting
  • infrastructure projects
  • real estate laws
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