The graph shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK (expressed in percentage terms).

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information about the usage of several technologies in the years 1996 to 2002 in the UK. From an

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perspective, it is readily apparent that CD

player

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were the most favourite option among others

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internet

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had the least users. At the beginning of

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1996,

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higher percentage

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25% than

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phone

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at 19%.

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, it seems to

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different amount with

CD

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player which got the highest

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at 60%. Home

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happened to reach the highest peak at 65% in 2002. The same pattern applied to

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it increased constantly to 48% in the next 6 years. Throughout the year, CD

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kept

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steadily until the

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recorded number

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81%. Internet

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were available

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from the year 1998. As it

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introduced, the utilization grew dramatically to approximately

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42%.