The graph shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK (expressed in percentage terms).
The graph below illustrates the change in using of
differents
connected devices in homes in the UK from the Correct your spelling
different
year
1996 to the year
2003.
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year
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particular
figures
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CD
player
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players
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the Internet appeared latest but
its datas increased in a rapid range.
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CD
player
and home
computer
were two patterns which increased steadily. In 1996, CD
player
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players
figures
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reached the peaking point in 2003 with 81%. Correct pronoun usage
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about
25% compared with the previous Change preposition
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in 1996. However
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computer
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computers
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with
nearly 60%.
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player
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the 2
figures
had some differences. In the first 2 years, the percentage of mobile phone
increased moderately from nearly 20% to 22% in use in the UK. And began from the end of 1999, the Fix the agreement mistake
phones
figures
fluctuated until the year
2001. Besides
, in spite of being the latest pattern, the percentage of the Internet climbed from 15% in 1996 to over 40% in 2003.Submitted by mai132004mai on
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