The graph shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK (expressed in percentage terms).

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connected devices in homes in the UK from the

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1996 to the

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2003.

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, the percentage

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patterns of access witnessed an upward trend from

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. In

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were the highest.

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the Internet appeared latest

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its datas increased in a rapid range.

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were two patterns which increased steadily. In 1996,

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took up 60% - the top

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of 4 patterns of access. Its data rose marginally

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to time. And

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reached the peaking point in 2003 with 81%.

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25% compared with the previous

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in 1996.

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an upward trend and peaked in 2003

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nearly 60%. Take a look closer

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the same trend

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had some differences. In the first 2 years, the percentage of mobile

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increased moderately from nearly 20% to 22% in use in the UK. And began from the end of 1999, the

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fluctuated until the

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2001.

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, in spite of being the latest pattern, the percentage of the Internet climbed from 15% in 1996 to over 40% in 2003.