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You are taking a cource at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven't finished it. Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter: -introduce yourself. -explain why you haven't handed in the project yet. -request more time to do it.

#cource #college #deadline #project #week #haven #lecturer #-introduce #-explain #-request #time
Dear Professor Khoshim, Hope
this
 letter finds you in
radiat
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radiant
radiate
 health and the best of spirits. I'm writing to express the
last
 date for your
scheme
 was
past
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the past
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 week.
However
, I
don't
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haven't
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 finished
to
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apply
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your project. My name is Khusan Esomurodov and I belong to Uzbekistan. I have
got
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different certificates and degrees. I
taked
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 part in the
Olympig
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Olympic
 Subjects. At the moment, I am taking a course national college. At the now, I'm learning are additional variety
trades
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of trades
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.
For instance
,
artisantly
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artisanal
, carpentry,
builder
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 and other skills.
Therefore
, I haven't finished at the planned time is
deadline
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 for your
scheme
, and I destroyed
in
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apply
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your
much
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undertaking the planned. So, I was
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responsible for
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this
 project.
Of
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This
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this
has
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is
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 one of the
solution
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.
This
 is for should
giving
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give
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 more time
is me
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to
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.
Likewise
,
that is
 the
scheme
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that need
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need
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needs
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 to be spent
a
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apply
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more time. So,
this
 project
has created
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is very difficult
complicated
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and complicated
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. Henceforth, I'm facilitating
this
scheme
. Yours sincerely, Khusan Esomurodov
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task achievement
Please ensure the introduction of the letter is clear and directly addresses the situation. Mentioning your background is not necessary unless it directly relates to the reasons for the project's delay.
task achievement
Explain the reasons for the delay with concrete examples or situations that prevented you from completing the project on time.
task achievement
A more formal and respectful tone is required when addressing a lecturer. Avoid using slang or overly casual language.
coherence and cohesion
Present your points more coherently by organizing information logically, using separate paragraphs for each new idea, ensuring each one clearly relates to the previous one.
coherence and cohesion
Use appropriate connectors and transition words to improve the flow between sentences and ideas.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure the letter includes a proper greeting at the beginning and a formal closing at the end, which is expected in formal letters.
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