The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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ratio
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the ratio
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of
househilds
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households
in
owned
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an owned
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and rental
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apartment
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apartments
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in two
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European
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counrties
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countries
over 2 years.
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, it can be clearly seen the
persentage
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percentage
of households
in
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owned shows
upword
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upward
trend,
while
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households
in
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rented had dropped. First of all, the highest
persentage
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percentage
of both figures was rental
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apartment
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apartments
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about 75 per cent in 1918. After
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number
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a number
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of rental
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apartment
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apartments
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slightly
decriese
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decreased
and was stable in the year 1953. From 1961
started
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gradually drop
percentage
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of rental
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house
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houses
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until
reach
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reached
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the lowest point of the given time period
near
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35
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percentage
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.
Untimaly
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Untimely
that
number
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had
inceased
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decreased
slightly,
latest
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the latest
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number
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of
rental
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the rental
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house
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houses
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was about 38 per cent in 2011. The household in
owned
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the owned
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house
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houses
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had
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a diffetent
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diffetent
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different
trend, in the
begining
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beginning
amount
of
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percentage
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of
owned
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the owned
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house
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houses
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was 23 in 1918.
Consequently
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years
this
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number
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show
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shows
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slightly grown
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slight growth
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after
stay
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constant in the next year. From 1961 until
reach
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reached
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a peak
this
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number
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illustrate
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rose steadily. In the
last
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year in 2011
percentage
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of owned
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apartment
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apartments
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was approximately 64.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words apartment, number, percentage, house with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • predominant
  • accommodation
  • trend
  • shift
  • households
  • homeownership
  • economic and social circumstances
  • interwar period
  • post-World War II
  • government policies
  • urbanization
  • public policy
  • economic prosperity
  • tipping point
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