You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment. Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter o● explain why you will not pursue a full-time job in his/her company o● say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her o● tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I recently finished my master's degree and unfortunately, I need to leave
this
part-time job to search for full-time employment. Recently, I completed my master's in Computer Science and to get my degree, I need to
work
as a full-time employee in an
IT based
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company
. I have been working with TJX Canada as a part-time associate for more than 3 years .
This
job is a good fit for
new comers
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or for the one's who want to pursue
their
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career in
an
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Interior
Designing
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or
in
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Business Management.
According to
my study, I need to
work
in an
IT based
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company
to require
hand-on
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experience with machines and technical terms.
This
part-time job not only helped me financially
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but
also
enhanced my English speaking skills.
Moreover
, TJX taught me many advanced skills that are required in any business like
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player, customer service,
problem solving
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, and many more.
This
company
has
good
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working environment and co-workers that made my whole working journey enjoyable. As I have been searching and giving interviews for full-time jobs so, I will not be able to
work
much longer with
this
company
. My
last
day at
work
will be 1st March 2024. I hope you will address
this
concern as soon as possible and please let me know if you require any
further
information. Yours faithfully, Tom
Submitted by harneet2001kaur on

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Coherence and Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, make sure to organize your writing clearly. Each paragraph should have a clear central topic. Transitions like 'Furthermore,' 'Additionally,' or 'However,' can improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs. Aim for a strong opening and closing statement that clearly addresses the letter's purpose and finalizes the discussion.
Task Achievement
In terms of task achievement, you've done well in explaining the reasons for leaving and your experience at the job. However, providing more specific examples or elaborating on your future career goals and how they align with your education could strengthen your response. Be sure to maintain a polite and professional tone throughout the letter.
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