The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart represents how many
people
residing
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have resided
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in India and China from the year 2000 until today,
along with
the projection until 2050.
Overall
, the
population
in India has experienced a dramatic rise since 2000 and it is projected to continue to grow until 2050. Meanwhile, the number of Chinese citizens has witnessed a slight movement between 2000 and 2050, as it rose slowly to its peak and
projected
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is projected
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to diminish slightly until 2050. Based on the stated source, India’s
population
has surged ever since 2000, as it began at 1000
billion
and added approximately 400
billion
citizens up to
this
day. The
population
then
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is then
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predicted to keep adding up until its peak in 2050 with around 1600
billion
people
.
On the other hand
, China’s
population
started at around 1250
billion
people
in 2000, and since
then
, it only went up to around 1420
billion
people
until
last
year. Compared to India, China’s
population
is forecasted to decline for the next 25 years, though the trend of the decrease is quite low where it only hits just below 1400
billion
people
in 2050.
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