The diagrams below show The life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
These diagrams illustrate the life cycle of a silkworm and the
stages
of production in order to create silk
cloth
.
Overall
, there are 4 stages
in a life of a silkworm that in total takes around 2 and a half months. The production of silk
also
has its own number of stages
that when counted is
at 5 Verb problem
apply
stages
. It is obvious that dye is added in order to turn it into different colours.
First,
the silk
moth lays its eggs on the mulberry leaves. This
stage takes 10 days until the silkworm larva
hatches. Then
, the larvas feasts on the mulberry leaves for 4 to 6 weeks. After that, the larva
forms a cocoon
using a singular silk
thread for 3 to 6 days. The larva
stays in the cocoon
for 16 days before it becomes a moth and continues the cycle.
The production of silk
cloth
starts when the larva
becomes a cocoon
. It starts by selecting the right cocoons to be created into silk
cloth
. After the selection process
the cocoons are boiled, and unwinded to become a 300 to 900 meter Add a comma
process,
of
thread. When completed Change preposition
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unwinded
it is twisted with other threads, and dyed to become coloured threads. Once Correct word choice
and unwinded
this
is done it can finally
be weave
into a Change the verb form
be weaved
be weaving
silk
cloth
.
In conclusion, creating a silk
cloth
takes a long time whether its
waiting for the Replace the word
it's
it is
larva
to turn into a cocoon
,
or the time it takes to get enough threads to create a Remove the comma
apply
silk
cloth
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