The diagrams below show The life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

The diagrams below show The life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
These diagrams illustrate the life cycle of a silkworm and the
stages
of production in order to create
silk
cloth
.
Overall
, there are 4
stages
in a life of a silkworm that in total takes around 2 and a half months. The production of
silk
also
has its own number of
stages
that when counted
is
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at 5
stages
. It is obvious that dye is added in order to turn it into different colours.
First,
the
silk
moth lays its eggs on the mulberry leaves.
This
stage takes 10 days until the silkworm
larva
hatches.
Then
, the larvas feasts on the mulberry leaves for 4 to 6 weeks. After that, the
larva
forms a
cocoon
using a singular
silk
thread for 3 to 6 days. The
larva
stays in the
cocoon
for 16 days before it becomes a moth and continues the cycle. The production of
silk
cloth
starts when the
larva
becomes a
cocoon
. It starts by selecting the right cocoons to be created into
silk
cloth
. After the selection
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the cocoons are boiled, and unwinded to become a 300 to 900 meter
of
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thread. When completed
unwinded
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it is twisted with other threads, and dyed to become coloured threads. Once
this
is done it can
finally
be weave
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into a
silk
cloth
. In conclusion, creating a
silk
cloth
takes a long time whether
its
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waiting for the
larva
to turn into a
cocoon
,
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or the time it takes to get enough threads to create a
silk
cloth
.
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