The diagrams below show The life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
These diagrams illustrate the life cycle of a silkworm and the
stages
of production in order to create Use synonyms
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cloth
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Overall
, there are 4 Linking Words
stages
in a life of a silkworm that in total takes around 2 and a half months. The production of Use synonyms
silk
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also
has its own number of Linking Words
stages
that when counted Use synonyms
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at 5 Verb problem
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stages
. It is obvious that dye is added in order to turn it into different colours.
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First,
the Linking Words
silk
moth lays its eggs on the mulberry leaves. Use synonyms
This
stage takes 10 days until the silkworm Linking Words
larva
hatches. Use synonyms
Then
, the larvas feasts on the mulberry leaves for 4 to 6 weeks. After that, the Linking Words
larva
forms a Use synonyms
cocoon
using a singular Use synonyms
silk
thread for 3 to 6 days. The Use synonyms
larva
stays in the Use synonyms
cocoon
for 16 days before it becomes a moth and continues the cycle.
The production of Use synonyms
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cloth
starts when the Use synonyms
larva
becomes a Use synonyms
cocoon
. It starts by selecting the right cocoons to be created into Use synonyms
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cloth
. After the selection Use synonyms
process
the cocoons are boiled, and unwinded to become a 300 to 900 meter Add a comma
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of
thread. When completed Change preposition
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unwinded
it is twisted with other threads, and dyed to become coloured threads. Once Correct word choice
and unwinded
this
is done it can Linking Words
finally
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be weave
into a Change the verb form
be weaved
be weaving
silk
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cloth
.
In conclusion, creating a Use synonyms
silk
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cloth
takes a long time whether Use synonyms
its
waiting for the Replace the word
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it is
larva
to turn into a Use synonyms
cocoon
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,
or the time it takes to get enough threads to create a Remove the comma
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silk
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