The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1994 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph demonstrates how many
billion
minutes the UK citizens devoted to making phone calls via
three different ways over a seven-year period between 1994 and 2001.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that although
both the mobile calls and national and international - fixed line
calls witnessed a significant rise throughout the period in the
question, local - fixed Correct article usage
apply
line
calls fell back to its
starting point after a gradual increase.
As can be seen, in 1994 the local - fixed Correct pronoun usage
their
line
calls were responsible for the major part of phone calls at 70 billion
minutes, however
, the
mobiles were the least popular among the residents, Correct article usage
apply
in other
words
they were used about 3 Add a comma
words,
billion
minuets
. Correct your spelling
minutes
Moreover
, while
in1998
the use of three types of calls climbed to different extents, the local - Change preposition
in in1998
fixed
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-fixed
line
peaked at 90 billion
and the national and international - fixed
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-fixed
line
rose steadily to 50. Besides
that, the counts for mobiles
calls were almost Change the noun form
mobile
one tenth
of the local - fixed lines in 1998.
Another important fact is that after 1998 both the mobiles and the national and international -fixed lines grew Add a hyphen
one-tenth
thus
, they soared to around 45 and 60 billion
minutes respectively. In contrast
, the figures for local
- fixed Correct article usage
the local
line
dropped to 70. Also
, by the end of the studied period
the degree of differences between the three categories shrank.Add a comma
period,
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