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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph compares the amount of
electricity
 in
Kwh
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kWh
 that the top ten countries produced and consumed in 2013.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that China and The United States are by far the largest and
second largest
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electricity
 producers and users
respectivey
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respectively
.
Furthermore
, Germany and Korea.Rep. were the only two countries studied
where
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that
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 used
electricity
 more
that
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than
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 they produced. As can be seen with regards to
electricity
 production, China generated 5398
billion
kWh
, the highest quantity,
while
 the US ranked second with 4099
billion
. These figures were significantly greater than those of
remaining
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the remaining
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country
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countries
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, with Russia in
the
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third place, recording 1057
billion
kWh
, and
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the republic
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republic
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Republic
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 of
korea
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Korea
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 in tenth generating 485.1
billion
. Turning to
comsumption
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consumption
,
although
 the US produced 4.099
billion
kWh
, making it
a
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the
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 country with the biggest surplus. The second largest surplus was in India, where consumption was 698.8
billion
kWh
, 172
billion
 lower than production. China, which used 5322
billion
kWh
, had the
greates
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greatest
 consumption rate,
whereas
 Brazil had the lowest with 499
billion
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, kwh, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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