The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line graph reveals data about the
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of
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transported in the United Kingdom by various methods of transportation systems (road, water, rail pipeline) From 1974 to 2002.
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, what stands out from the graph is that there are significant upward trends in the rates of
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transported by road, water and pipelines,
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the portion transported by rail remained almost constant over the period of
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: The most considerable
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of in the Uk both
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of products transported were by road (70 in 1974 and 2002 were 70
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tonnes
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and 98
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tones respectively),
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the lowest in bath 1947 and 2.02 were by pipeline (about 5
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goods
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and just over 20
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good respectively.
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, it is interesting to mention that all types of transporting
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decreased slightly in 1994 except the pipeline, which improved to about 21
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tonnes
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. The number of
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transported by rail was almost constant at 40
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tonnes
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in 1994 and 2002, with a fluctuation in the
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over, over the period. The proportion of
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transported by water Was in the third rank in 1974 lat 30
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times);
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, There was considerable growth over the period (at approximately 62
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tonnes
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.).
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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